Although editing is good fun and
everything, we are running into some problems. The majority of these are that
we find predetermined sections for our film to be boring and struggle to
captivate anyone. They do not fit with the model our film has developed into
and so we have had to let go of these ideas for the better. It is difficult to
let something that you worked hard for go. There are elements, like
documentaries and statistics, which we wanted to include, but that just would
not fit well. What our viewers will be missing is some interesting information
that might bore most people. The ultimate goal, once again, is to captivate and
hold audience’s attention. Unfortunately, this day and age, entertainment is
more important than education so we had to figure out how to fit that model of
filming and editing. Your happiness comes over anything else, what you learn
comes second. The key is to excel at both of these elements and I believe Joey
and I have done that very well up to this point. We are almost finished with
our edit and it is looking great so far. We expected some hurdles from the
beginning and once we get over those and are in the clear we should have a
great final product.
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Tuesday, June 3, 2014
How Editing Works!
The editing process is becoming a
pattern for me. What seems o happen is once we hit a new section of the film we
do a voice over narration and then find clips to suite the words said. Then the
final cut edit takes place where I make precise edits so that everything flows
smoothly. Doing this over and over gets a little frustrating, but it is paying
off. I love the film we have produced so far. There are some important
sections, like history, that are not the most exciting and captivating, but
they had to be done. Overall our goal is to keep your attention throughout the
whole film, not for you to fall asleep, that would be a failure. Yes, we worked
on this on our own, but throughout this we brought people in to view sections
and get comments. This is to see whether they are enjoying it. Joey and I didn’t
watch the film with them but rather watch their facial expressions to see
whether they were enjoying it or found it boring. Almost everyone says it is good,
but we believe they were only being nice, so there were changes that had to be
made, for the better.
Another Monday...
...Well,
not really. Most people might dread Mondays and wish that they never existed. I
think that’s a waste of time because then there would just be Tuesday to
complain about. But for me, throughout this project, I can honestly say that
I've been extremely excited for every single day. I'm doing a lot of work,
that's the truth. But, it's all work I want to be doing and all work that is
extremely interesting. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again: I’m
definitely enjoying this experience! So again, for me, the days mostly blur
because I enjoy every single one of them.
However,
this Monday actually was actually very important because it marked the turn
into the last week. Yesterday, on Monday, I dis used with my sponsor how the
last week was going to look. On Friday, I discussed in my blog how I’m now
moving into some finalizing steps. Yesterday, I continued to get to work on
that. I wouldn’t say that I have an overwhelming amount of work to do and
things to accomplish before the end of the week, but I will say that this week
is a highly, highly important one. Yesterday, I made my turn towards the finish
line. I might have been serious before, but now it’s time to really get serious
and really take these finalizing steps seriously.
Monday, June 2, 2014
La Fin
Today, Brandon and I had a goal to finish our documentary completely and be happy with the final product. But, we had to do a bit of last minute filming and editing before we were fully satisfied, knowing how much of a perfectionist Brandon is. After we compiled the last minute footage, put it all together and watched our entire documentary… it felt amazing. It was incredible to look see all of our work coming together as we watched our 10 minute film. After it was finished, and the credits rolled on the screen, I looked back at Brandon and smiled. It was such a relief that all of our hard work paid off. However, there is still work to be done in preparing for our presentation. Knowing our film is 10 minutes long, we still have to make a short presentation, explaining how we put this movie together. There is still two days left, which is a lot of time. With this being said, Brandon and I will likely devote our time to practicing the presentation and working on our reflections. All in all, we had our doubt early in the process, unsure of how the final product with turn out. But in the end, we couldn’t be happier.
All on Our Own
Our time with SWERVE was a fantastic experience but it was also an amazing experience living in New York City for two weeks. Both of us had been there many times in the past, but always for a short time with a parent. This was the first time we lived their on our own. We were both nervous before we got there because we weren't completely confident with our ability to navigate the city. We knew that we needed to be economical which meant taking the subway to and from work every day. We spent our first day in NYC learning which train we would take and which stop we would get off at. We even did some test runs on the subway to make sure we understood our route.
I was so surprised at how quickly we became familiar with the city. We began to figure out where everything was and even know how long it would take us to get to each place in the subway or a cab (even with crazy NYC traffic). It was really cool that we were on our own because it gave us a sense of responsibility that neither of us really knew we had.
The experience really helped us get ready for college. Before we know it, we will be moving away and living on our own. Our time in New York City has helped us become much more confident about moving away from home and everything we our comfortable with. We now see how capable we are to adapt to our new surroundings.
-Amanda and Marshall
I was so surprised at how quickly we became familiar with the city. We began to figure out where everything was and even know how long it would take us to get to each place in the subway or a cab (even with crazy NYC traffic). It was really cool that we were on our own because it gave us a sense of responsibility that neither of us really knew we had.
The experience really helped us get ready for college. Before we know it, we will be moving away and living on our own. Our time in New York City has helped us become much more confident about moving away from home and everything we our comfortable with. We now see how capable we are to adapt to our new surroundings.
-Amanda and Marshall
SWERVE-ing into Cleveland
After delving into the realms of franchising,
our next task was to look into Cleveland. Is Cleveland populated with people
that fit SWERVE’s demographic? Are young professionals moving to or back to
Cleveland? Most importantly, is Cleveland a good fit for a SWERVE franchise? How
would franchising affect SWERVE?
Upon
reading several articles that supported the increase in the young professional
demographic in Cleveland, Amanda and I deemed it a perfect fit for SWERVE. The
ideal location for SWERVE would perhaps be downtown or in Ohio City- as both
are thriving destinations with residential buildings and "trendy"
restaurants. Among all of the up and coming areas in Cleveland, downtown is the
most populated with young professionals.
Despite
SWERVE's excellent potential in Cleveland, Amanda and I agree that franchising
should be a long-term goal. Why? Because SWERVE, the "mother
company," would lack absolute control over the franchise and the actions
of the franchisee, and this could create conflict.
In conclusion,
Amanda and I agreed that Cleveland would be a great location for a franchise
(and perhaps we could be the franchisees! :) ), as our extensive research
supported; however, SWERVE should solidify its roots in New York before anything
else.
The table
below indicates growth in Cleveland that specifically correlates to SWERVE’s
demographics.
SWERVE-ing into the future
Our next task involved research. Amanda and I
knew little about franchising, and thus had lots to learn: How did they work?
What were the pros and cons?
The disadvantage to franchising that would
most significantly affect SWERVE has everything to do with control. When a
company is franchised, the “mother company” loses full control over the outlets
of the chain. Although the franchisor (mother company) can establish
stipulations over the franchise, the franchisee can make decisions that could
ultimately affect the franchisor’s profits. If a franchise saw an increase in
sales, but the franchisee decided to allocate the revenue in a way that
decreases the profits, the franchisor will take less of a royalty. Moreover, the franchisee could blemish
SWERVE's brand and name. For these reasons, Amanda and I agreed that SWERVE
should continue to solidify it's good standing and deepen it's roots in the
Flat Iron district before venturing out to other US cities.
As
soon as SWERVE is ready, it should be franchised. Franchising is low risk, but
a source of easy expansion capital. Without spending much of SWERVE's own
capital, franchisees will open SWERVE studios across the country- and pay for
the costs of developing each individual outlet. While such costs are paid by
the franchisee, SWERVE the franchisor, will take in a percentage of each
outlet's profits.
SWERVE is well on its way to phenomenal
success! We
cannot wait to see how SWERVE evolves and succeeds in the future.
Written by Marshall Rankin and Amanda Trau on May 28, 2014
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